Here is a sentence I'm trying to write but it isn't coming out properly. Help please! Lol. Kieran is one of the story's main characters. He has chin length raven black hair streaked with silver at the temples. The character the sentence is describing has hair the same length but it is a lighter shade of black, almost a dark, dark brown/black mix. Should I keep it that way or should I just make things easier & change his hair color? XD Thanks in advance for your help!
A tall, impossibly pale man with hair cut to his chin just like Kieran’s but lighter leaned against the wall for a moment before walking up next to Kieran’s chair.
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